Revised; Final narratives, Storyboards and Screenplay.

Storyboards

Final Idea

• About a couple who are together, both very popular and seem to work well together. The girl in the relationship (Sarah) is a very bright girl and does very well at school despite her busy social life.

• The couple have a very close set of friends, a few girls and a few guys who always 'hang out' together after school and on weekends. Sarah has her close friends (Hannah) who are almost inseparable. Apart from Sarah having her friends from her own group she also has friends outside of it, one of which is a geeky, less popular guy (Ben I) who seems to be struggling at school ( so we think) therefore Sarah offers to help him with his studies by becoming his own personal 'tutor'.
• As Sarah starts to tutor the geeky, less popular guy her boyfriend (Ben C) starts to get quite obsessive and some what protective over his girlfriend. The couple start to have major arguments over silly little things which lead to Sarah deciding she can no longer carry on her relationship with him.
• After Sarah sends Ben C text ‘Its Over’ strange things start to happen and Sarah starts to feel as though she is being watched/stalked but she doesn’t know who by. She suspects its her Ex boyfriend as she knows he became very obsessive, when she bumps into him at the corner shop think convinces her even more that it is him watching her.
• Sarah starts to receive notes and gifts from an anonymous sender. Sarah tells her friends she is scared and doesn’t know what to do but after finds that one by one her friends are being murdered, one is a bath, one whilst walking home and one while watching TV.
• Sarah doesn’t quite know what to do now, while watching TV she thinks what her next move should be, whether that be telling her parents or even the police....
• While watching TV she senses that someone could be in the house but tried to put this thought out of her head and carries on watching TV.
• The geeky, less popular guy (Ben I) is stood behind Sarah with a knife as Sarah turns around he tries to calm her down but she runs and hides herself in another room down stairs. Ben I doesn’t know where she is so he seeks her all over the house, starting upstairs, getting closer and closer to her.
• Lucky for Sarah her Ex boyfriend decides to pop around seen as her parents aren’t in and he is worried about her as she has been acting strange with him due to the watching, notes and gifts she suspects he has been sending her.
• Sarah decides to make a run for the front door to find her ex-boyfriend stood outside, she tries to explain to him what is going on but he cannot understand what she is saying.
• They soon end up hiding and calling the police, the geeky, less popular guy is now looking for Sarah outside, after a bit more of 'hide and seek' the police arrive and the geeky, less popular guy ends up being sent to a mental hospital.

The preferred reading of our film trailer is that Ben (Caties/boyfriend) is the serial killer, however this isn’t true; the twist is in the educated reading as the actual killer is Lewis( Ellies more unpopular friend that she tutors)

Final Idea.

Versimilartude is created by using familiar locations such as home, and using scenes of the primary target audiences general activities which helps the audience to relate to the trailer such as a social scene of a group of make and female friends and a more personal scene of girlfriends chatting, this helps the audience to apply the trailer to their own lives, which dramatises the more frightening aspects.